tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-616982860776135414.post1782080006754167976..comments2023-10-18T09:35:55.767+02:00Comments on LUDWIG'S ROHRSTOCK-PALAST: A Special Story (Part 2)Ludwighttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14975294529532823252noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-616982860776135414.post-64651070088791197842016-12-17T14:00:38.205+01:002016-12-17T14:00:38.205+01:00@ Anonymous: Thank you! :-)@ Anonymous: Thank you! :-)Kaelahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17108718924415630397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-616982860776135414.post-53514286496649468722016-12-14T03:49:59.636+01:002016-12-14T03:49:59.636+01:00Delightful writing !Delightful writing !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-616982860776135414.post-83095970439323980482016-12-11T20:32:14.032+01:002016-12-11T20:32:14.032+01:00@ Michael M:
I am happy that you enjoyed the first...@ Michael M:<br />I am happy that you enjoyed the first two parts of the story! I hope the next two parts will cater to your fantasies even more, since they involve a different constellation of spanker and spankee. :-)<br /><br />@ Our Bottoms Burn:<br />I know you aren't into canings, so it is indeed a good thing you don't have a cupboard to keep one... ;-) I am sorry to say that the next two parts will involve canings as well, but there will also be at least a strapping (sorry, no paddling). Since you like to switch roles, I hope that the story as a whole is to your liking, though, since it will not only involve M/F action!<br /><br />@ Svetlana:<br />The embedded story thing is indeed very hard to recognize in part one and part two of the story, because there is just one paragraph in each part that belongs to the frame story. Ludwig proofreads my posts, but only one by one as they are published. He also overlooked the first paragraph and told me he didn't realise what belonged to the frame story and what to the embedded story when I asked him after he had read part one.<br /><br />Glad you enjoyed the description of the caning! I also don't like overly long stroke-by-stroke accounts, but of course I want to have a certain build-up and some details nonetheless. So that's what I tried to give the readers when I wrote the story.<br /><br />I've just realised that the accounts of the upcoming spankings are even shorter because my focus was on the surrounding story in that part – I hope the spanking scenes are not too short!<br /><br />@ jimisim:<br />I am glad that you enjoyed the story so far. :-) And thank you very much for telling me about my mistake! I've already changed the size to half an inch. I am indeed not familiar with the English system of measurement and always have to look up how many cm one inch is. I am not sure whether my mistake was because of the two different measuring units, though, or just because I wrote a huge part of the story down in one go and just thought: Oh, the cane should be a thick one, about as thick as a thumb. For some reason in my tired mind I might have made a thumb 5 cm thick which is of course not the case (unless it is a really, really big thumb)! I read the story again later to correct mistakes but unfortunately didn't double-check the plausibility of the sizes. It's a good thing you paid attention!Kaelahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17108718924415630397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-616982860776135414.post-83173009691430113962016-12-10T23:35:48.354+01:002016-12-10T23:35:48.354+01:00Ive often thought that I'd like to read a span...Ive often thought that I'd like to read a spanking story by you.<br />I'm please4d to say that I wasn't disappointed and hope it won't be your last.<br />One pedantic point though and I'm sure its unfamiliarity with the English system of measurement. I doubt you meant the cane to be two inches diameter which is 50mm; I suspect you meant half an inch or 12mm dia, which is a very severe cane anyway.jimisimnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-616982860776135414.post-2955518844953262942016-12-10T12:21:30.920+01:002016-12-10T12:21:30.920+01:00This was fast! It surprised me that we already got...This was fast! It surprised me that we already got to the caning by Mr Johnson, but that's only because I had overlooked the first paragraph of Part 1, assumed that this was the frame story and expected the "blue knickers" to feature in a flashback to her schooldays. Anyway, Part 2 turned out really good, particularly the caning itself: short and sharp as opposed to a blow-by-blow account that can easily get boring (particularly with 24 strokes). Now I'm very curious about how the frame story will proceed.Svetlananoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-616982860776135414.post-61983471698719402572016-12-10T11:50:28.239+01:002016-12-10T11:50:28.239+01:00I did not know that you could write stories on dem...I did not know that you could write stories on demand. A fine talent.<br />It seems that canes are usually kept in cupboards. Good thing we don't have one.Our Bottoms Burnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11365742469460740718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-616982860776135414.post-12275759125595685332016-12-10T07:58:39.876+01:002016-12-10T07:58:39.876+01:00A great tale, well told. Good for the imagination....A great tale, well told. Good for the imagination. Hope you keep going with the idea of suggestions.Michael Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03973355063564380071noreply@blogger.com